Some unfinished stuff i found on my comp

Devastation....

Take time to elaborate,
My dreams they infactuate,
Here let me illustrate....

So detailed i just caracterize,
Not victimise, but revitalise,
Music shows a passion,
To stop slavery for ya fashion,
families famishing
Babies being born with HIV,
Would you kill ya own baby?
REALITY!!
In third world countries,
But you feel no obligation
to give credit to their nation,
Their in deep desperation,
Think of the hurt their in,
You carry on purchasing,
Nike and gucci garms,
Lil kids losing legs or arms,
For stealing a coffee bean,
Or a tea tree leaf,
To make money,
This aint funny,
When your steaks being carved n,
Think of the poorer starvin


( dunno when i wrote tht loool!!)

For what it was i liked it, topic was cool.
Not all multi's worked for me though.

Still thought the lines were a little too short too.

Yeah i know. I might work on it tonight and make it better. I been deleting bare form my comp and come across lots of stuff ive obviously made like a skeleton, then not put the flesh and clothing on! soooo ill fix them