Hype/Angels and demons

These are the first 2 tracks iv done using samples, which were actually made on an iphone app called beatmaker,
Could someone drop some crit on one of these beats.

thanks


http://www.myspace.com/131583797?albid=&songid=68428671

yeh im liking them although i dont like the drums structures to be honest - think they need a boom bap kinda drum - other than that they are cool

Hype - Nice sample cuts/sample flip, drums was kool, decent enough track.
Angels and Deamons - Not feeling the drums or the sample flip really on this one, needs work, the sample has potential to be nice though.

I don't like the drums or the drum pattern on Angels and Demons. The sample has been chopped up far too glitchy and makes it sound choppy. As Supreme says though you can work it SO MUCH better if you tried.

Hype..
Liking the intro, sounds wu tang ish.
It's quite a nice use of the sample, but the snare is SO wrong for the beat, you need something that hits, this snare seems to just clash with the track.
It has the potential to be dope though, with a doper drum beat i'd use it.

dont like angels and demons - drum structure isnt right for the sample for me. Sample isnt flipped very well either imo

hype is better, drum pattern is better and sample is better, try adding your own elements to these tracks though rather than just a sample and drums.

Cheers for the feedback fellas, yeh im not sure how to do drum patterns yet iv always been a melody type of fella but ill work on it, iv got a load of new drums kicks etc now so ill play around with it cheers